The first mistake we made was having the tripod in the back ground which was very unprofessional and amateur like.
|As you can see in the background you can clearly see the tripod.|
Also in the last scene it was one of the biggest mistake we made was seeing peter in the background on the computer which shows how unorganized we were and how unrealistic this scene was. He was not meant to be shown in this scene because he was knocked out on the floor. we didn't realise this
mistake until we re watched the prelim.
|Peter on the floor when he was knocked out.|
|as you can see peter is on the computer when he was meant to be on the floor.|
We did not have any close up shots of each characters reaction so therefore in our thriller opening we made sure that we had many close up shots.
We made sure that our lighting was brighter for our audience as in knock out the quality and lighting was very poor. we could not see much.
|scene from obsessed|
|scene from Obseesed|
Over all there wasn't nothing else to improve from the prelim film. I think we improved our camera skills the most because we kept the camera steady and did a variety a camera shots whereas in the prelim film there was limited of shots it was mostly over the shoulder shots.